% in Liar - Session 3 by TenthCrewMember

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% in Liar - Session 3

POSTED BY: TENTHCREWMEMBER
UPDATED: Friday, July 28, 2006 02:14
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Thursday, July 27, 2006 6:15 PM

TENTHCREWMEMBER

Could you please just make it stranger? Stranger. Odder. Could be weirder. More bizarre. How about uncanny?

Here ya go!

As always:

Comments welcomed.
Deragatory remarks ignored.
Random thoughts of whimsy embraced.

BWAH!
TCM

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Thursday, July 27, 2006 8:50 PM

STDOUBT

Interesting,
It's pretty wordy --funny should be simple IMHO.
But interesting -don't give up!

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Friday, July 28, 2006 2:14 AM

TENTHCREWMEMBER

Could you please just make it stranger? Stranger. Odder. Could be weirder. More bizarre. How about uncanny?

Yeah, that is one of my concerns. Unfortunately some things don't translate as well, at least in my mind, from reality to comic, when I've tried to reduce the verbage. The other option is to do more frames, so that the words "thin out" a bit. Again, I'm new and I'm learning!

Thanks for the feedback!

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