I need reviews, PLEASE!!! by SoulOfSerenity

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I need reviews, PLEASE!!!

POSTED BY: SOULOFSERENITY
UPDATED: Wednesday, April 14, 2004 15:32
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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 3:38 AM

The Man They Call Soul...

I have the begining of a novel I am trying to publish on FictionPress.com. If any of you can read and review it, any input would be greatly appreciated. The link is:

http://www.fictionpress.com/~soulofserenity

Thanks in advance!!

Let me add, it's a sci-fi story, or as one reviewer put it: "Earth's End". If you read it, you'll like it, but I only put up a small tease.

It's not Firefly, if anyone's wondering.
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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 4:27 AM

SOULOFSERENITY

The Man They Call Soul...

Sorry, kinda wanna keep this floating for a while, so...BUMP!

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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 7:37 AM

SOULOFSERENITY

The Man They Call Soul...

Must BUMP!!

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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 10:21 AM

SOULOFSERENITY

The Man They Call Soul...

I know, I'm selfish, I just really need people to R&R. I've got an editor, but I need some input from you guys!! - BUMP -

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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 10:46 AM

BADGERSHAT

Hello--

I read your fiction, and I must say, I'm a bit confused. Then again, that's to be expected, given the short amount of story that I can read. But, I assume it's not Firefly related... so, where's it going?

The characters, in the limited span on the posting, seem on their way to becoming fairly well fleshed out, although I never knew a guy could be a General at age 39...

You might want to add to the amount you have posted, and let the readers get more of a feel for what's going on. Obviously, something happens that renders Earth unliveable... ?

Keep the writing up, we'll read it.

--The Hat

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"I like smackin 'em"--Jayne

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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 10:55 AM

SOULOFSERENITY

The Man They Call Soul...

I will post more, maybe, or you can just wait for the book when it's published. Like I said, just a teaser, and it's different then any end-of-the-earth book I've read before. It will suprise you, so maybe I will post more when I have a chance.

And the general thing...maybe true...maybe need to change that...and no, it's not Firefly, that's why I didn't post it here...

Thanks for the input, by the way.

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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 3:32 PM

FIREFLYWILDCARD1

Don't need to change the General's age. If there is a war going on, or one just finished, it is conceivable to have a 39 year old General. Now if there hasn't been a war in say about 5 to 10 years, then yeah the General's age does need to change. Cuz, people rise in the ranks a lot faster during war time than in peace time.

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