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Originally posted by anarchangel:
I don't know about the New Order comparison, but I do think a more dancey New Order style track would work well for Jayne."

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Originally posted by Staples:
I also like how everything you've done is taken from the most depressing stuff that happens in the show.

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Originally posted by Techtrekker:
My "nit-pick" is that the characters/plots/storylines in Firefly are not repetitive. That's why I like it so much, it constantly throws curve balls to keep the audience off-guard. And learning/looking for all those nuances is what keeps us coming back.

When I first started listening to your first track, I was engaged and was really enjoying myself, seeing Kaylee's yearnings/frustrations with Simon. But by the end of the track, the music started moving into the background and, although I was still enjoying the music, it was pushed to the side as I started thinking of something else.

Throw some curve balls, mix it up a little, take us on a journey beyond the single feeling that you effectively establish at the beginning of the song. The majority of your inspiration for "They Fall Right Out of the Sky" was from "The Message" and "Safe"; episodes which show Kaylee trying to overcome Simon's stubborn reserved nature. Your song can take us farther than those episodes can.

For example, at the end of "The Message" Kaylee takes hold of Simon's hand when they deliver the body to the parents showing a journey and change of those two characters from the beginning scene. Could your music/lyrics make a subtle change to show a journey as well?

Sorry if I seem preachy or long-winded. I give critiques on artistic work for a living and I tend to fall into that "mode" sometimes.

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