Trashed: a poem by zzetta13

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Trashed: a poem

POSTED BY: ZZETTA13
UPDATED: Monday, December 22, 2008 06:24
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Sunday, December 21, 2008 5:04 AM

TRASHED: A Poem

There once was a fellow named Haymer,
A laser weapon his claim to fame-r,
But the crew of Serenity,
Hiding their identity,
Made stealing this artifact their aim-er

Mal and Saffron strolled in side by side,
A future may haps Bonny and Clyde,
They worked out a plan,
To rob the lonely man,
With success I say if Saffron not lied

Mal left in the desert bare assed,
That Saffron was a cruel hearted lass,
She sought to recover,
By deceiving her old lover,
That relic from way in the past,

Inara played her part to perfection,
Blindsiding Saffron from her hidden direction,
The companion’s quite a gal,
Serenity picked up naked Mal,
There he stood taking the day in reflection.

Z

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Sunday, December 21, 2008 5:27 AM

THESOMNAMBULIST

Ha, ha. Awesome - I love poems, always fun to read. Keep at it.

I'd love to have a go,
Maybe later though...

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Sunday, December 21, 2008 8:19 AM

FREEBROWNCOAT

Loved it.

"Yep. Good day."

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Sunday, December 21, 2008 9:04 AM

MSA

ok applause and then some:) Good job

To love someone is to see a miracle invisible to others.
--Francois Mauriac
It's fuzzy-minded liberal thinking like that that gets you eaten.

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Monday, December 22, 2008 1:15 AM

ZZETTA13

Thesomnambulist, Freebrowncoat and MSA,

Thanks for your posts.I'M glad that you enjoyed the poem. Thought I'd put up something a little light spirited

Happy Holidays to you all!!

Z

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Monday, December 22, 2008 3:53 AM

RIVERLOVE

Mal stood there naked
For all the world to see
Inara snuck a quick glance
And red-faced was our Kaylee.

Mal showed no fear
As he proudly displayed his gear
Wash & Zoe giggled a little
As Jayne cleaned his knife with his spittle.

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Monday, December 22, 2008 6:18 AM

VERSEEXPLORER

ZZETTA13 and Riverlove, I like the poems.

I'll add a Haiku.

Saffron had a plan
It's not as expected
Mal's bare on the rocks.

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Monday, December 22, 2008 6:24 AM

LEEDAVIDT

"GOOD DAY"..."GOOD DAY" :)
GUESS THE LADIES DO LOVE NEKKED MAL
thanks for sharing

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