BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

LITTLEBIT

What Jayne Did II
Friday, May 26, 2006

Another he did/she did companion to "What Kaylee Did II." A disconnected continuation of "Act Two." Comments are swell!


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Jayne had that deep-in-the-bones satisfaction he’d come to expect from Kayleesex. He wasn’t asleep—just layin’ there feelin’ good like he’d done a good hard day’s work. Night’s work.

“I think I died.”

Kaylee’s voice was nice and husky.

“Yeah?”

“Just a little bit.”

“Mmm.” Good to know he had an effect on her—not that he didn’t know it from other sources. Nice to be complemented on a job well done, though.

“So did you go to heaven or hell?”

“Hmm?”

“When you died.”

Kaylee squirmed in a way that made her thigh brush up against his. “Somehow I don’t think you have good sex in heaven. Seems wrong.” He felt her move again. He opened one eye an’ looked at her. She was archin’ up. Interestin’ to see it from this point of view.

“Felt a little to good to be hell, though.”

Jayne closed his eyes again and chuckled.

Kaylee sighed.

“I should go.”

“Mmmkay.” Jayne didn’t want to have to get up. She knew her way out.

“Did I leave my unders here last time?”

Jayne smiled. He’d found them stickin’ out from under the mattress. Wasn’t sure how they’d gotten there, but they’d been real cute. All pink and soft. He didn’t remember takin’ them off her. Wasn’t really payin’ attention then.

“Jayne.”

“They’re in the top drawer. I didn’t wash ‘em or nothin’.”

“Ew.”

He shrugged. Wasn’t like he didn’t smell all Kaylee-y anyway. Her unders touchin’ his weren’t gonna make much difference. Nothin’ he hadn’t touched before.

“I should go.”

She said it in a way that even Jayne knew she didn’t want to. Not like her bunk was far away er nothin’.

Jayne opened an eye and looked at ‘er. “You wanna stay?”

She smiled.

She could creep out before everyone was awake. Or while they were all eating breakfast. It all depended on what they decided to do in the morning whether she’d be available before or after breakfast. Jayne was leanin’ toward after.

He sighed and moved to make more room for her. His bed wasn’t made to hold two. She was little, though.

She rolled onto her stomach with her face turned away. He wasn’t used to seein’ her like that. She wasn’t wearin’ anythin’ still. Jayne watched her back rise and fall and didn’t like how vulnerable she looked.

“You need another blanket or anythin’?”

She moaned a little. Jayne didn’t know if it meant yes or no. He’d have to crawl over her to get another blanket. He didn’t want to crawl over her.

He pulled the blanket coverin’ his guns off the wall an’ threw it over her. He rolled onto his other side so his back was to her. He slept better that way.

COMMENTS

Friday, May 26, 2006 8:59 AM

LFABRY


I love a good Jayne story like you love comments. We'll have to collaborate on our next posts, so I don't end up splitting up such a fine dual look at the same event.

Friday, May 26, 2006 10:00 AM

MORDSITH


Your inner Jayne is right on I think. So cute. I *heart* you for all the fluffiness you have brought today!

Friday, May 26, 2006 1:13 PM

REENIE


Oh yeah, I like the idea of both points of view in the same chapter. I love how they have tender thoughts of each other, but not at the same time or over the same things. Very true to life.

This is just so fun! Thanks for the treats.

Friday, May 26, 2006 8:02 PM

BOOKADDICT


You could put them together or split them up...they're great either way!

I like the growing feelings between the two of them...one thing leading to another.

Friday, May 26, 2006 8:28 PM

SQUISH


Love this whole series, how Jayne is rough/tough Jayne, but with just that hint of softness underneath.

Friday, May 26, 2006 8:45 PM

RINNYPJ


*sighs*

I just... I can only second what everyone else is saying. Just... *LOVES*


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