Floating by Iwantomarrywash

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

Floating
Friday, December 16, 2011

Wrote this in 5th grade and added on the last 3 lines today :) Hope you enjoy fedback welcomed with open arms. I want to write another fiction but have no senarios, if you have one you would like to see done Ill try my best :) MERRY CHRISTMAS

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4990 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

Part of me left, When you left. But you are still near, I can feel you here. Yet you remain gone, No I cant move on. Wish I were with you, Not in this blueish hue. Cant breathe without you here, Wont shed another tear. For the life I lost, At the highest cost. A steak to the heart, Was all it took to depart, From the life we lived.

COMMENTS

Friday, December 16, 2011 5:41 PM

BYTEMITE

Hey, this is pretty good. :) The only thing I can see is that you probably meant "stake" and not "steak."

Friday, December 16, 2011 7:23 PM

IWANTOMARRYWASH

thanks :) i gues i was hungrier that i thought :)

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