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Criticism Wanted

POSTED BY: LOTV
UPDATED: Thursday, June 26, 2003 06:45
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Monday, June 9, 2003 11:15 PM

LOTV


Yay! I'm finally recognized as a member (that was starting to piss me off...)

Anyways, I've recently been getting back into drawing (because my pictures have stopped sucking for once!) and so I've been doing nice sketches of different manga.

So, I've got a sketch that I would like opinions/criticism, for any who would like to offer. (Special Thanx to MegaTokyo)

Okay... seems that the IMG command does not appreciate pictures saved as txt files.. just click the link...


http://www.geocities.com/tuxedo_matrix/girl-edit.txt


Thanks!

LOTV: Ima-who-whata-whoichy-whoda-whazza--huh?

Stubble Report: Little upset at being manipulated by a stupid vampire wannabe queen, otherwise... decent

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Tuesday, June 10, 2003 5:49 AM

SUCCATASH


I wish I could draw like that!

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Tuesday, June 10, 2003 7:15 AM

CHRISTHECYNIC


Damn you (this is the standard compliment I give to people who are far better than me.) Don’t be offended, it’s kind of an inside joke, but not really. It is a (big) complement.

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Tuesday, June 10, 2003 9:43 PM

LOTV


Compliments graciously accepted (it is always a wonderfully refreshing feeling to be damned.)

LOTV: Ima-who-whata-whoichy-whoda-whazza--huh?

Stubble Report: Wondering why I am still including them in my writings.

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Tuesday, June 10, 2003 10:21 PM

MANIACNUMBERONE


that looks really cool. how long did it take you? if not too long, you should market your ability. draw a comic, maybe? talk to succatash about the marketing thing. he's a genius.

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Tuesday, June 10, 2003 10:28 PM

LOTV


That sketch took me about an hour.

I'd love to actually start a comic online or whatnot, but at the moment, I'm only decent at sketches, and have yet to actually come up with anything original that looks good.

I'll put up another thread when I do something that I feel won't get immeadiately slaughtered by the general public.

Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate them.


LOTV: Ima-who-whata-whoichy-whoda-whazza--huh?

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Wednesday, June 11, 2003 1:42 AM

KOFFEE


Very nice. You have quite a talent going there.

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Thursday, June 26, 2003 6:45 AM

CHANNAIN

i DO aim to misbehave


Quote:

Originally posted by LOTV:
I'd love to actually start a comic online or whatnot, but at the moment, I'm only decent at sketches, and have yet to actually come up with anything original that looks good.



Nicely done! Good composition, use of form and shading...you created a mood of sadness here, or even forboding, depending on the point of view.

Have you seen the "How To Draw Manga" books? I don't do anime myself, but I've checked them out and they're excellent instruction manuals that should give you a leg up. You've got a GREAT start here. All you need to do now is practice, practice, practice and practice some more.

I found the way, by the sound of your voice--so many things to say.
These are only words. Now I've only words. Once there was a choice.
David Sylvian

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