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The Sleeper

POSTED BY: BROWNCOAT2007
UPDATED: Tuesday, August 28, 2007 19:49
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Wednesday, May 16, 2007 7:12 AM

BROWNCOAT2007


OOC: Hey all, I am just in the writing mood and decided to start a new talkstory, I'm pretty bad with titles so I'll take any suggestions and you all are welcome to join... anyways on with the story...

Pain... thats all his life revolved around now was pain...

He had been a soldier, once, long ago, or mabey not so long, he couldn't rightly recall anymore... Hell, he couldn't remember his name anymore, let alone how long he had been in there... Captured by the Blue Sun Brigade and handed over to their science department during the second Unification War, also know as the Maranda War, he only knew his designation code, BC'07, for BrownCoat2007, the 7th enemy unit captured and being put through the combat augmentation program...

They ran battery after battery of tests, working out the "bugs" before they would start makeing a entire company of Purple belly soldiers, weapons really, using the same drugs on them, the ones that caused him to change, to go beyond the regular human endurace, to live, again and again, after tortures that would kill a normal man

They tested his pain tolernace by submitting him to extremes of heat and cold, electricuting him, torturing him daily...

They tested his regenerative ability, stabbing him, removing limbs, cutting, and, finally shooting him, killing him, or so he thought... untill the next morning when he awoke only to be put through the same battery of tests again and again, day in day out, week after week, month after month, untill the day they started using the second round of drugs, the ones that took his regular senses from him and made him more beast than man...

These tests found him being hunted by the blue sun brigade, a kind of "live fire" training for the raw recruits, getting them used to killing browncoats, but also allowing them to test his reaction times and his hightened senses, and testing his regenerative abilities again and again...

This new drug caused pain, even more pain then the torture as they changed his DNA, forced it to evolve in days as opposed to over years, forceing his body to change, to give his eyes the ability to see in the dark without the use of night vision, to allow him to track and moniter others by body heat, heart rythm, breathing, scent... he could see, hear, and smell better than any human ever could...

The evoultionary process also allowed for a great increase in stamina, strength, agility and speed, allowing him to move with catlike stealth and speed. This also gave him an advantage when it came to hand to hand combat. The only thing stopping him from using his new abilities to the fullest was the pain...

OOC: well than... this is the intro to my character and his abilities, if ya feel like joining go right ahead, and please help me come up with a better title What I'm trying to do with this is have an ongoing story about my (and anyone who wants to join) character and what he goes through... keep in mind folks, this is to be a more serious, and probably darker set of stories, but feel free to play around and have fun... play an Alliance Scientist, another Browncoat soldier, what have you and we'll see where it goes from here




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Tuesday, May 22, 2007 8:09 PM

BROWNCOAT2007


OOC: bump! I see you people... I KNOW I haven't read this 48 times by myself... come on, don't be scared

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Tuesday, May 22, 2007 8:53 PM

RIVER6213


Title “The Sleeper”

The dripping sound of water. The dripping sound of water never stops, but seemed that it was a sound that would last a life time. Each drop and drip seems to go on and on without mercy. Each drip tells a story and that story echoes more stories, and those stories are horrors...

Sleeper agent #1263 awakes in an abandoned warehouse with a start, and a somewhat strangled cry in his voice. There is tightness in his legs as well as in his arms. He is rather groggy from whatever he did the night before, but the problem is that he cant remember what he did the night before, yet his hands are all bloodied with the dark, dried blood of someone who did some thing questionable, but Sleeper agent #1263 never really gives this sort of thing a complete thought as he...



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Wednesday, May 23, 2007 7:16 AM

BROWNCOAT2007


OOC: Thanks for the title, think I'll take it

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Wednesday, June 20, 2007 11:01 PM

BROWNCOAT2007


OOC: bumpity bump bump... people.. PLEASE... if you read this, even just glance at it... PLEASE write something...

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Tuesday, August 28, 2007 7:49 PM

BROWNCOAT2007


OOC: BUMP... Folks, where are you??

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