Ballad of Serenity, Continued by DonCoat

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Ballad of Serenity, Continued

POSTED BY: DONCOAT
UPDATED: Tuesday, October 31, 2006 06:58
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Monday, October 30, 2006 3:39 PM

Okay now.

We've done limericks.

We've done Burma Shave signs.

We've done haiku.

I think it's time we turned our attention to one form we've never done: Joss's own structure for the Ballad of Serenity.

Take my love, take my land,
Take me where I cannot stand.
It's all right, I'm still free.
You can't take the sky from me.

Easy, right? I'll start:

Amp me up, cause me pain,
Stick your needles in my brain.
Gorramn your Academy!
You can't take the sky from me.

Years have earned my Captain's trust.
Big damn heroes? Ain't we just.
Nothing shakes my loyalty,
You can't take the sky from me.

Next...?

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I'm pointin' right at it!

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Monday, October 30, 2006 3:48 PM

KANEMAN

You're a prick, Yer a di*k
I'll zip you up, in my pants
That's okay, yer balls are free
And your posts are lame to me

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Tuesday, October 31, 2006 5:17 AM

DONCOAT

See how I'm not punching him? I think I've grown.

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I'm pointin' right at it!

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Tuesday, October 31, 2006 6:29 AM

ECGORDON

There's no place I can be since I found Serenity.

Go ahead and punch him. No one would blame you.

wo men ren ran zai fei xing.

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Tuesday, October 31, 2006 6:58 AM

JAMESTHEDARK

Take your war, I've found my peace
to fly where I've found my release.
You c'n lock me up, but I'm still free,
'cause you can't take the sky from me...

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I ain't lookin' for help from on high. That's a damn long wait for a train don't come.

98% of teens have smoked pot, if you are one of the 2% that haven't, copy this into your signature.

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