Dark Angel Season 3; how would YOU have wrapped it up? by chrisisall

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Dark Angel Season 3; how would YOU have wrapped it up?

POSTED BY: CHRISISALL
UPDATED: Thursday, May 12, 2005 11:07
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Monday, April 25, 2005 12:45 PM

Here you get to tie all the loose ends from Dark Angel up in a nice neat package. A few sentances, a short paragraph or two, or a Gorram full-length script, I don't care.
I got my own ideas of how it'd go, but I ain't no writer, and I'm sure someone out there is able to come up with somethin' outstanding. And the Max Collins books, while well written, lost momentum and just didn't do it for me in the end.

Edit: I know that on the dvd the commentary exposes the basic elements of season 3, but I'm not necessarily interested in that, just where you would have taken it to a finish.

Any DA fans wanna take a shot?

Browncoat with a little feline in his cocktail Chrisisall

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Tuesday, April 26, 2005 7:22 AM

CHRISISALL

Okay, here's my clumsy attempt:

After the events in Freak Nation Ames White is taken to a mental hospital, where he breaks out with the help of a Cult assault team, convinces them that they're the top of their genetic food chain and deserve to rule the 'new world'. White and co. then kill off the leaders of the Cult and take charge.
The Transgenics are working on a delivery system for Max's 'genetic salvation', and near completion.
Days go by as Logan finishes deciphering Max's runes- they talk about balance, blagh, blagh, basically Max was designed to counter White. Max ponders while Logan says it's just based on some old prophesy and in an emotional moment, he touches her. Logan falls to the virus and is taken to Dr. Shankir, who gives 'em the 'Nothing we can do, Joshua's blood could only save him once' speech.
Max, knowing Logan is as good as dead, decides to take it to White, and Joshua follows against her orders.
Max and Joshua find Cult HQ and do some recon. The comet passing Earth will be the signal to alert thousands of Breeding Cult operatives in key positions worldwide to take over as the virus begins to kill millions, co-ordinated by White, and plunge the Earth into the dark ages again.
At the hospital Logan's eyes open. Dr. Shankir looks puzzled.
Back at the Cult hideout Lydecker appears in front of Max and Joshua. "I've been aware of their operation for some weeks now. You'll need some help." He says. Our two heroes, already in shock, look over their shoulders to see a dozen armed commandos. " Not much, but well trained and loyal.." Lydecker adds. They all crash in and go berserk on the bad guys! Cult baddies drop left and right as they were caught off-guard. Lydecker and his men trade lives for lives. Lydecker is killed. Now down to Max, Joshua and White, all others dead or running. White grabs a gun and shoots at Max- Joshua jumps to take the bullet and falls. Max, in a blinding burst of speed grabs and twists the gun out of White's hand, kicking him back a few feet at the same time. She points the gun at him. Comet approaching Earth, control panel waiting to be activated, White says "..Can't be faster than me, I was bred to-"
Max shoots him in the head. [Flashback: "...I don't do guns."] White's body hits the ground.
No sounds or movement, now. She is the only one standing. [Flashback: her and Logan kissing/ Logan dying] She sinks to her knees. "Logan...", she mutters. As if by itself the gun begins to move. She slowly points it at her own head, tears begining to flow. "No,little fella", says a rising but bloody Joshua. She drops it, sobbing.
Outside cars pull up. Max sees Logan step out of one. Amazed and crying, she runs to him.
"We're too late, the comet's on us!" she says. Logan explains that her genetic code was piggybacked onto a cold virus that was successfully launched into the atmosphere last week, making most immune to the comet's effects, and that Joshua's blood has mutated his genes enough to help his antibodies wipe out the virus. Comet passes Earth. Logan and Max hug and kiss like no one else is even there.
Cut to: Space Needle with no one on it.
Fade out.

Was that okay?

First time writer Chrisisall

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Thursday, April 28, 2005 12:48 AM

FANTASTICLAUGHINGFAIRY

Very good there, chris. If only it could really have ended like that. *sniff* Well, I'll ponder awhile and see iof I can comwe up with anything. Not sure though, Not much of a story person.

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Thursday, April 28, 2005 2:07 AM

KESSIE

Lol thats funny cause a friend of mine and me sorta wrote a finale for the series. Its on our site

http://www.darknessenemyinc.de.vu/

but doesnt wrap up all, but a some of things. You can read it if you want but i must say its a bit old and my english wasnt the best back then.

They say it’s the last song
They don’t know us, you see
Its only the last song
If we let it be

http://www.darknessenemyinc.de.vu/

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Thursday, April 28, 2005 11:41 AM

CHRISISALL

Thanks a LOT for the interesting read! Nice to know some fans out there cared enough to finish off the series (albeit, unofficially) on their own. Makes me want to flesh out my own story, now.
Again, Muchas gracias mi amigo.

Girls kick ass, says so on a t-shirt Chrisisall

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Friday, April 29, 2005 8:48 AM

KESSIE

Glad that you liked it!

They say it’s the last song
They don’t know us, you see
Its only the last song
If we let it be

http://www.darknessenemyinc.de.vu/

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Thursday, May 12, 2005 11:07 AM

CHRISISALL

Okay, it's over half a month since I wrote this, so I punched it up some, but I think it would've been pretty good. I came up with it on the spot, in a few minutes, and now, in my mind, this is how it ends.

Closure-seeking, DA obsessed Chrisisall

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