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Tranquillity - Part VII
Wednesday, March 7, 2007

Jobless and soon to be on the drift, accepting Inara's charity turns out to be the least of Mal's problems...


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1316    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

“I just– It's all so standard... and boring,” Zoe grumbles as she follows her husband down yet another corridor, indistinguishable from the last ten. “Two-thousand and eight, two-thousand and nine,” Wash mutters under his breath as they pass the numbered doors. “How can it be more boring than our bunk?” he returns, “Wait and see, you don't know what it's going to be like yet.” “Honey, it's a hub. They're all the same. They give me the creeps,” she says flatly. He stops short outside a door, folds his arms and sighs. Too late she remembers he grew up on a hub most likely the twin of this one, just wreathed in a fog of pollution. “This will be different,” he says firmly, “But if you're determined to hate it, let's turn around now.” She deflates a little, suddenly feeling far less justified in her complaining, like a petulant child caught out. “I'll give it a try,” she says, a bite of impatience still in her voice. Wash doesn't care, he knows victory when he sees it. He slots his identi-chip into the lock and it goes from red to green. “You first,” he says. She pushes open the door and steps inside. “You silly little man,” she says softly, “How much did this cost?” There's a double bed with satin sheets. Thick, soft carpet on the floor and tasteful hangings over cream walls. The windows look out over New Dunsmuir, the docks just visible in the distance and the houses of none-corporate workers laid out far down below. The sun is setting, the horizon a smear of pinky-orange fading to blue. It's not a bad view, as far as they go on Beaumonde. “Enough,” he replies, and then can't quite suppress his glee, “Wait until you see the bathroom.” She drops her bag on the bed and pushes open the other door. There's a jacuzzi-sized tub, more than big enough for them both. “A real bath!” she enthuses, turning around and flinging her arms around his neck. He lets her kiss him for a moment. “Why don't you run that bath? I bet it takes a while to fill,” he says quietly when their lips break apart for a moment. She kisses him again quickly. “I love you,” she says, and a moment later the sound of running water fills the room, Zoe's soft humming underscoring the noise as she undresses. He sits down on the bed, takes off his shoes. It's only a relatively cheap hotel room, when all's said and done. Champagne and the strawberries in the cooler if they've managed to get the room right, and maybe a film they can cuddle up watching later – much later- he tells himself. He wishes he could give her more, although he's not sure if a grand palace with as many baths as rooms could make her smile wider than it is right now. He hears her get in the bath as he flicks through the guide to the television channels they can access. Much as he wants to be in there with her, he knows how much Zoe likes relaxing in the tub and he figures he should give her a few moments to herself. She's still humming. She only hums when she's really happy. He's done good, he realises, and – “You plannin' on joinin' me, husband?” she asks, her voice a low purr. He can see her through the open door, arms folded on the edge of the bath-tub, eyebrow raised partly in mockery of her own seduction. He swallows. “Oh yeah,” he manages, and leaps off the bed.

*

There's no one around in the municipal park after dark, and Jayne considers this a good thing, as Kirsty kisses his neck and slides a hand into his trousers. Even after the shooting range, neither of them has quite enough trust to go back to a bunk – it could too easily be a set-up, after all. Kirsty doesn't seem to mind this, however, which explains why they're in the shadow of a gardener's shed, his fingers already fumbling with the buttons of her shirt as her hands find his erection. It's not romantic, but it feels a thousand times nicer than any whore's parlour. He realises he's almost forgotten what it feels like to have sex you haven't paid for, and that's a gorram sorry state of affairs. She steps out of her trousers and he lifts her up, strong hands cradling her bottom. She wraps her legs round his waist; pulls him close and now he remembers and it feels -God!- It feels good to be welcome and wanted inside her, rather than a way to put food on tomorrow night's table. She doesn't try to kiss him, even when she comes and her forehead presses against his, nose to sweaty nose. She understands the rules – you never kiss them when you'll probably never see them again. Means something more than just a quick, fun fumble in a park if you do and neither of them want that. But she's pretty, he thinks afterwards as he does up his trousers, and he won't be sad if they do see each other again. “I gotta go,” she says, voice still a little husky, once they're mostly dressed, “We're shippin' out in a couple of hours.” “I figured,” he rasps, “Hope it goes just fine for you guys.” She nods. “You too. If the stars smile we might just see each other again on Tranquility. If I'm lucky.” Tranquility. Mal hasn't told him the name of the moon where they're dropping the cargo, but he guesses that's where she means. “Won't be unhappy if we do,” he returns. “Bye Jayne,” she says, all sweet sexy smile. He waves as she sashays away from him, swallowed up by the dusk after a moment. “Won't be unhappy,” he murmurs again to himself with a smile.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 7:55 AM

EMPIREX


Good ol' Wash! Such a great husband. Zoe's a lucky woman. And Jayne and Kirsty... is this a romance in the making? =D

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 8:50 AM

AGENTROUKA


Oh, I'm really enjoying this series! You have a more than just solid grasp on all the characters and their voices. Especially your Zoe and Wash are just spectacular! Loving and steady, nothing overtly sugary about just. They feel as married and fascinating as on the show.

Your little side note on Mal and dirt, the cows and the life he left, in one of the earlier parts.. I was delighted. Exactly the right rhythm and word choices to make it feel as nostalgic and regretful but ultimately.. over, as it is.

Then here, that small moment with Jayne. Nothing flashy, just an encounter, but it says a lot about him, the few soft bits and his subtle respect for women, his sensitivity to the grey areas of buying sex. Three-dimensional Jayne is a rare gift in fanfic, thank you!

Not to mention: Plot!!

If there is one thing to complain about, it's the shortness of the parts. You could have easily fit all of these posted chapters into a single one, especially since you posted them all at the same time, anyway. *g*

To sum up: I'm very excited about this series, where is there more? Please?

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 1:24 PM

LAMBYTOES


Aww, Wash is so perfect... Zoe is ridiculously lucky to have him.

Ooh, is Jayne having emotional attachments to a woman? This could be interesting...
Is Tranquility the planet, or some not-so-lovely quirk of this job?

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 3:24 PM

HEWHOKICKSALOT


I admit, I'm not easy to please, especially with regard to Firefly fanfics. It takes a truly engaging story, with near-perfect characterization and dialogue to keep me interested beyond chapter one. I'm not really a fan of the "love fics." By this I mean the strictly romantic variety. Yours has just enough to establish the relationships without dwelling too long, or getting overly (or perversely) descriptive.

I look forward to the continuation of this story. I'm intrigued by the prospects you've introduced.

Keep up the good work.


Rob O.

P.S. By the way, nine crew members? I'm doing a quick head count. Mal, Kaylee, Jayne, Zoe, Wash, Book, River, and Simon. Mal mentioned head had nine people to feed. Inara's gone, correct? Just checking...

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 5:41 PM

KATESFRIEND


Really enjoyed your fic - your grasp of sci fi concepts is refreshing and vividly written. Your characterizations are wonderful! Looking forward to more.

Wednesday, March 7, 2007 8:23 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Good ol' Wash...man knows how to treat his lambytoes to somethin' special when the opportunity arises;D

Definitely can't wait to see more of this...though it seemed like Jayne and Kirsty were using code in their goodbyes. Was waiting for Jayne to ponder on some hidden signal for a moment;)

BEB

Thursday, March 8, 2007 2:06 AM

AMDOBELL


Knew there was a jolly good reason I love Wash so much and here it is! He knows Zoe so well and he loves her so much, it was very touching and made me warm and happy. And Jayne gettting some trim, he didn't even have to pay for! At least, I hope he won't have to pay for it. I'm not sure that when she says Tranquility she is talking about the moon our BDHs are heading for but we'll see. I still feel nervous though with so many of the crew off the ship. Kind of makes me think of Serenity as vulnerable. Can't wait for the next part and very well done on completely blissing me out on a great story with some beautiful character moments. *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Thursday, March 29, 2007 4:12 PM

AERIALLA


This series just keeps getting better and better. You have done such a wonderful job with the character voices while adding much needed new characters to the verse.


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