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The Things They Carried 7 - Kaylee Fry
Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Reminders and treasures among the crew of Serenity. A series of drabbles and double drabbles - one for each crew member.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1196    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Kaylee’s a keeper. She keeps everything: old love, lost hope, and all the parts she’s ever taken off Serenity ‘cause you never do know when a broken down thing might just come in handy.

Kaylee was broken, for a time. Leastways, she felt like she was. Who but a soul with something wrong in it could hang about her daddy’s barn tinkering instead of having tea parties and gossiping with other girls?

“Tinkerer!” That’s what her mother had yelled at her often enough – “That’s all you’ll ever be, just like your Pa! No-good tinkerer!”

So Kaylee would run, out of the barn and up an old tree, not come down ‘til the stars came out and she’d done her wishing on them. Then Cap’n’d come along and just handed them to her: the stars, the verse, and all the wishes she’d ever secreted there.

So those broken feelings, that’s all in the past, now, though she still has them, of course – Kaylee’s a keeper – and it’s not often but they still can ambush her time to time, send her running straight to the engine room, where Serenity croons to her and reminds her of just how perfect she really is.

COMMENTS

Sunday, May 24, 2009 8:49 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Uh...just wanted to note this, but it's "Frye" for Kaylee's last name, not 'Fry." Also, with part 6, Inara's last name is "Serra" not "Sera" (though it could be derived from it, since Serra supposedly is a Spanish name).

And I have to also say that you're really taking on some new directions for character background, since I dunno if I have seen a mention of Kaylee's mom being anything but encouraging of Kaylee's aptitudes toward all things technological.

The imagery of Mrs. Frye basically insulting her daughter because she's a tomboy, and with enough frequency to a) have Kaylee develop self-esteem issues to the extent of wondering if she's broken because of her lack of interesting in nominally feminine things; and b) spend several afternoons/evenings up a tree wishing on stars? It's rather jarring...but strangely something that I imagine Joss & co. COULD have pulled had the series lasted longer. Would have been interesting to see Mrs. Frye face off against either Zoe or Inara and have either BDH defend Kaylee...the use of either female BDH could have really played home the question of gender identity and its definitions.


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