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The Things They Carried 9 - River Tam
Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Reminders and treasures among the crew of Serenity. A series of drabbles and double drabbles - one for each crew member.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1201    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

So much has been taken from River, forcibly stripped from her brain, she’s afraid to keep anything, afraid even to reach for the comforts Simon offers.

So River squirrels away things she knows aren’t hers anyway. When she’s convinced Simon she’s asleep so that he, himself, will go to bed, she secretly takes them out and turns them over in her mind: the Captian’s tenderness, Jayne’s loyalty, Zoë’s innocence and Wash’s ferocity, Simon’s desires and Kaylee’s bravery, Inara’s hopes, the Shepherd’s name – all things their owners have forgotten and no longer miss, each ruby deep and diamond bright:

Buried treasures.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, May 20, 2009 8:35 AM

BYTEMITE


Interesting you recall a line in Zoe's drabble about Wash being her ruby. By that, that makes Wash her innocence. It makes me wonder just who or what represents the gems of the other characters.

Thursday, May 21, 2009 2:11 AM

JANE0904


Oh, I think they do miss these things, perhaps deep in the night when River is examining them, when they dream of earlier times when things weren't quite so hard ... Lovely stuff.

Thursday, May 21, 2009 2:52 AM

GILOVE2DANCE


Oh this was lovely!! Jayne's loyalty...very nice.

Thursday, May 21, 2009 3:34 AM

KATESFRIEND


Sorry for not commenting on these individually, but I couldn't stop reading them. They are very very good, and have wonderful insights into the characters and the deeper meanings of their motivations. Thanks so much for sharing these.

Sunday, May 24, 2009 10:11 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Yes! This is River all over and covered with our beloved super genius' favourite dessert topping!

;)

No...really, this drabble totally captures both River's developed to avoid attaching feelings to things and people because the Academy and its backers have shown quite the talent of being able to steal away all kinds of things precious to her. The addition of River packratting away things like Mal's pre-war compassion or Jayne's loyalty to someone other than himself is definitely something River would focus on, because they're things that the Blue Hands wouldn't touch because they're things that each person doesn't seem to have any more...except each element is buried deeply :D


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