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WATCHHOWISOAR

"2 Lefts And Then A Right. Or Is That The Other Way Around?" Part. 4 In "Wacky Fun!!"
Saturday, April 1, 2006

Wash is a the best of the best. can find his way, no matter what.So, when he's handed the map to the Alliance prison, getting out should be a cake walk........right? A/N: REALLY sorry it took so long. Computer lost Internet connection the night I was going to post. Timeing huh? any ways i tried d-spacing this time good? bad? what do ya think? ALL feed back welcome. thanx! -WHIS


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1649    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Wash is in his cell asleep, when he hears foot

steps walking away from him. Then a loud bang,

as the door closes. He looks out left, then

right. He sees nothing, but when he turns around

he See's a brown 2 x 3 feet pony envelope. He

walks up to it and opens it in shock. Because in

side of the package is the blue prints to the

alliance facility he's in. "Wow", he says still

in shock. "Guess I'm not so screwed after all."

Wash has a small smile on his face. This is the

first piece of good news since I woke up I this

place. He thought. And to think, a few weeks ago

he was going no where fast! With his smile

still on his face, he goes to work looking for a

way out.

One hour later.......

The guard walks up to the door. Wash is

pretending to be asleep, behind the gate. As the

guard opens it Wash hits the gate with both his

feet, sending the guard flying into the opposite

wall. Wash gets up looks down at the guard

and says: "Sorry Charlie, Wash is unable to take

your call at the moment. please leave at

the "Beep". Wash takes "Charlie's" gun and heads

off in his pre-planned destination. "I hope this

works." is what he say's to him self, knowing

he's going to need all the luck he can to pull

of this fong luh (Crazy) plan.

30 minutes later.......

Wash is running though the halls looking sightly

confused. "Ok, that was a left, right?" he looks

down at the map again. Then up. And then, hoping

that the map would change, looked down

again. "Ok that," and he points down one of the

four halls. five if you count the one he came

though. "is where I came from. and that," he

points to another hall "is the hall I started

from sooooo......" he looks at the map once

more "I'm back where I started from. Great!!"

he sighs, and looks at the map once more. Then

he see's something. Something he can't believe

he missed. he sighs "Dang-ran. (of course.)" he

says........and turns the map..........right

side up!! "Now, lets try this again shall we?"

5 minutes later.........

After zipping though the halls, things being a

lot easier of course, with the map being right

side up and all. Wash reaches a hall that on the

map says 'Emergency Side Exit On Left'. On the

blueprint, also is a note on certain exits

indicating which ones will be de-activated. "Now

that's a little better."

2 minutes later........

Wash reaches the end of the hall. thinking to

him self ''Wonder where every one is? Must have

known already that i've decided to take a walk

on the midnight hour. You would think they'd

come'a running.'' In all it took the great Wash

30 minuets of wandering the halls, 3 minuets to

figure out WHY he was wandering the halls, 5

minuets to find the right hall, 2 minuets to get

the exit and another 5 minuets thinking about

this!! Wash wasn't out that door 10 steps before

that alarm stared to ring. "I should probably

run." wash looked back "yeah, that would be a

good idea." that's the last thing he said before

he took off as fast as he possibly could.

COMMENTS

Saturday, April 1, 2006 5:15 PM

WATCHHOWISOAR


if ya don't like the D-space tell me and i'll change It.

Saturday, April 1, 2006 6:53 PM

SHEPARDGHOST


Its great that Wash talks to himself while he is escaping its something that he would completly do. Keep up the good work.

Saturday, April 1, 2006 9:41 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Not a bad piece of fic, Watch...Soar;)

Though I do find the d-spacing for this a mite distracting...though not as bad as massive paragraphs.

BEB

Saturday, April 1, 2006 10:54 PM

WASHBURNEFAN


Truely Wash Worthy!

Sunday, April 2, 2006 1:45 PM

ITSAWASH


WHIS, I like your Wash. He's a good 'un. And I like the foot-gate crashing bit. Nice.

Not crazy about the spacing, but that's just me. You should do it however YOU like it. Write us some more, okay? Hope your pc behaves so you can. *huggles.

Thursday, April 13, 2006 2:08 PM

WISHUPONAWASH


The best do far of this series.
The spacing isn't great, maybe it's just me. Space out the dialoge, cause it can get lost otherwise (as happened abit in the early parts of your story).

Looking forward to seeing how it playts out!

Sunday, May 21, 2006 7:32 PM

JORJAREYNOLDS


I really like this, you have captured wash totally.


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