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It Is Coming Part 2
Tuesday, January 9, 2007

The next part in my fanfic. This part is just helping to build up the back story, no real action yet, sorry, but that's coming in the next part. I forgot to mention at the start of the prologue that this is just immediately after “War Stories.”


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The silence was broken by the screaming from next door. Jumping up, Simon ran through to River’s room. She was screaming in her sleep. She was screaming that it was coming. “It’s coming! It’s coming!!!” “River! River! What’s coming? What’s coming?” “Yeah, what is coming?” This voice came from behind. Simon turned, and saw Wash standing by the wall. The screaming had, by now, attracted most of the crew. “It’s coming…” River muttered, quieter now. “The thing... from out there… from the black…” Glances started shooting around the room. Nobody was saying anything, but they were all thinking the same thing. Reavers. The noise of the door opening made them all jump. “We’re home!” Mal cried out. “With plenty o’ money!” “And no bullets!” Jayne’s voice rang through the inter-com straight after Mal’s. Wash backed away, and hurried to go see his wife. Grinning as he descended the stairs into the cargo bay, he looked carefully at Zoë. She almost never came back with any serious wounds, (well, nearly almost never) but he still worried. Who knew it could be so dangerous out there, and to have someone you care about to be in one of the most dangerous position in the entire crew. But he had come to recognise it. He certainly wasn’t going to do her job. He had tried it, and it wasn’t his piece of cake. “Kaylee!” Mal bellowed. “I gots a present for ya!” A head appeared at the top of the cargo bay over the hand rail. Mal grinned, and waved around, what looked to him, like a small piece of lead scrap. “A burn isolator!” she cheered, and quickly ran down the stairs towards the away team. “A what now?” Jayne asked, completely clueless. For all he knew, the two could have made this all up on the spot. “A burn isolator,” Kaylee said, with the expression of one talking to a three year old. “It lets the ship full burn without so draining the secondary thrusters! Oh, Cap’ in, this is so shiny!” “Well, I hope you like it,” Mal said. “Cause I got some bad news for you as well.” “OK, now I’m worried…” “Well, on the good side, I got you your new isolating thingy, but on the bad side, I need you and Wash to get Serenity to be able to out-run a Falnax.” Mal looked at her with complete confidence. “Why… what did you do to the Falnax?” Kaylee looked at the Captain for a few seconds. Then she saw the look on his face, and glanced at the part in her hand. “Yeah, the last job took us to new and exotic places.” Mal smiled. Nobody in the cargo bay was surprised by the explosion that shook the ship. “You know, next time we rob a ship, remind me to take you with us so you can disable it first.” Mal pushed the button to close the bay, as another explosion shook the ship. He looked up, and was very thankful to see that Wash had already gone, even more thankful when the next time the ship lurched it was because they were launching. He turned to see Kaylee running towards the engine room. “Thank goodness for a capable crew,” Mal said, before turning to see Jayne trying to get his sleeve out of the door of the hidden compartment. “Boy, isn’t life fun.”

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Tuesday, January 9, 2007 10:47 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh...that doesn't bode well. Especially when I am pretty sure it isn't Reavers that have River so ramped up:(

Still...definitely am intrigued to see what will happen next;)

BEB

Tuesday, January 9, 2007 2:00 PM

AMDOBELL


What in the nine hells is a Falnax? And does that mean that Kaylee's burn isolator sort of came off it? River is being suitably worrisome with what sounds like portents of doom! Yep, back to situation normal and loving it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Tuesday, January 9, 2007 10:10 PM

GWENFREWI


Hmm, very intrigued by River's portents of doom and the trouble the Captain has landed his crew into AGAIN! *giggles*

Keep up the good work.


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