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It Is Coming part 3
Wednesday, January 10, 2007

The next part in the It Is Coming series. A Falnax is a ship that was made for the war but was too expensive to manufacture more then a few, so they never entered active service, although they are rare, they are manouverable, reliable and very well armed.


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“You know, next time we rob a ship, remind me to take you with us so you can disable it first.” Mal pushed the button to close the bay, as another explosion shook the ship. He looked up, and was very thankful to see that Wash had already gone, even more thankful when the next time the ship lurched it was because they were launching. He turned to see Kaylee running towards the engine room. “Thank goodness for a capable crew,” Mal said, before turning to see Jayne trying to get his sleeve out of the door of the hidden compartment. “Boy, isn’t life fun.” Simon looked around. “Hope the isn’t Alliance,” he thought, before quickly returning his attention to River. She had calmed down now, or at least she had stopped screaming. But she was still muttering quietly to herself. “It’s coming…it’s coming…and nothing can stop it…it waited out there, but now it has come… the thing from the black….” Simon sighed, and looked over to Book. “How is she doing, Lad?” Book asked. “She’s better…” Simon looked at his med kit. If only he had kept some of that Astrogala. The powerful pain killer would have been immensely useful right now…. But no, they simply had to deal with what they had. “Shepard, would you get something from the infirmary? I need something called Akarbard. It should help calm her down….” “Right” Book hurried out of the room.

“Kaylee, whats our status?” Mal was in the cockpit by now. “Uh… we’ve got about a dozen pipes close to exploding, two or three pieces almost exploding and if we go to full burn now then the entire engine will probably explode. So about the same as usual.” Wash hit some buttons on the console, and the ship rocketed towards atmo. The Falnax was firing after them, giant rounds piercing the sky around them, rockets launching, but thankfully not locking on. “You know, its times like this when I REALLY wish we had some gorram guns on this boat!” yelled Jayne. Wash grinned. “We have something much better then guns on this boat,” he said, through gritted teeth. “We have me.” With this, he hit a button on the control panel, and the Serenity suddenly dropped through the air as the extenders flew upwards. The Falnax overhead rocketed past them, as Wash let out a whoop. Then, yelling to Kaylee to prepare a full burn, he pulled the ship upwards, and shot skywards.

River screamed. “Serenity! She’s in pain!” Simon ran over quickly. These mood swings were gonna drive him crazy! “River! River! Stop! Stop!” Simon grabbed her arms, she was flailing around too much! “River! Serenity is a ship; ships can’t feel pain!” River gave him a look. Not just a normal evil look, but one that was mixed with pity as well. It was a look that made Simon feel as though he had just said something that was both incredibly stupid and incredibly rude at the same time. How River could do that was beyond him; but she had always been able to do it.

As the ship arrived in space, the Falnax was still in the planet's atmosphere. When Wash activated a Full Burn, the Falnax, unable to do the same due to the missing parts that were now in Serenity, fell behind. Mal grinned, and patted Wash’s shoulder approvingly. The feeling in the ship was vibrant. But suddenly an alarm went off. “Wash! What is it?” Mal demanded. “Its… its the Falnax…” Wash said, after checking the screen. “What about it?” “It… it just dropped out of the sky…”

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Wednesday, January 10, 2007 10:56 AM

GIRLFAN


>River gave him a look. Not just a normal evil look, but one that was mixed with pity as well. It was a look that made Simon feel as though he had just said something that was both incredibly stupid and incredibly rude at the same time. How River could do that was beyond him; but she had always been able to do it.

Loved that line!

>Wash grinned. “We have something much better then guns on this boat,” he said, through gritted teeth. “We have me.”

And that one even more.

Wednesday, January 10, 2007 1:25 PM

AMDOBELL


I'm not sure the latter half of this made sense:
'As the ship arrived in space, the Falnax was still on the planet'. A bit difficult for the Falnax then to be in pursuit of Serenity, it being on the planet ie ground. Then 'When Wash activated a Full Burn, the Falnax, unable to do the same due to the missing parts that were now in Serenity, fell behind'. I wish you would make it clear that both ships were in the air otherwise it ruins what is a good story. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Sunday, January 14, 2007 12:33 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Brilliant dialogue work here, Readout! Definitely loved Wash's line to Jayne about the need for weaponry;D

And does the ending mean the BDHs now have the lives of several people on their consciences that were not meant to die?

BEB


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