HALTING GIFTED ONES

Wednesday, July 15, 2009 2:20:39 PM

I'm not entirely happy with The Gifted Ones.

It's one of those things where I thought I was, but then I wasn't so I worked on it more, then I was, then I wasn't, then REALLY I was so I celebrated with Indian food and doggy biscuits (I celebrated with a labrador retriever) and I posted.

Now, I think I know the true problem.

I feel that I am neglecting a lot of the constant themes I wanted to portray in this series and I'm not telling everything I want to tell. It just feels awkward and not well balanced. So, if you come here one day and the entire thing's taken down, fear not. Right now I'm leaning on splitting it into two stories. One that follows New Haven, one that follows River and Co.